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Devon's February story now online: Assimilation

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Devon's back!!

Can't wait to read this.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

I'm not Devon or Deving...and we heard you the first time too, asshole.

You must think you're s-thing special.

:flip:

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

I'm not Devon or Deving...and we heard you the first time too, asshole.

You must think you're s-thing special.

:flip:

Now now, Deving. It's not feminine to fuss. :lol:

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

:scared:

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

:scared:

Would you admit it if you did?

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

:scared:

Would you admit it if you did?

Nah. I don't want to encourage the riff-raff that follow him around.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

:scared:

Would you admit it if you did?

Nah. I don't want to encourage the riff-raff that follow him around.

Probably just as well. I think his target audience is a bit more highbrow.

People see you liking it, they might assume it sucks.

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At times i wonder if i should just be thrrow with devon, his view of life is just too out there, this story is about aleins eating humans and kids having sex, is this where we are??

but i read it from start to end and was enggrobbed all the way throw.

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OK Deving, we heard you the first time.

Why don't you read the story for once, JJ? You obviously don't have anything better to do.

Then maybe your 'critique' would mean something.

I read a paragraph of his once. I find the temper tantrums of his 'fans' and socks more entertaining.

Seriously? You've never even read one all the way through?

I defy you to read this one story (and I haven't read it yet, so I don't even know if it's one of the better ones), and post an honest critique.

Are you capable of doing that?

You forgot to double-dog dare me.

What's the matter, afraid you might like it?

:scared:

Would you admit it if you did?

Nah. I don't want to encourage the riff-raff that follow him around.

Probably just as well. I think his target audience is a bit more highbrow.

People see you liking it, they might assume it sucks.

There you go. Maybe I should start praising it.

How about this for a review: Devon's Fiction - It's Doesnt Suck as Much Ass As I Would Have Thought.

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There you go. Maybe I should start praising it.

How about this for a review: Devon's Fiction - It's Doesnt Suck as Much Ass As I Would Have Thought.

I think you might really like this story. The main character has kind of a JJ vibe.

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