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#1 Devon

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:36 PM

Short story writing contest, sponsored by Devon. Judged by others.

Your picture prompt for the story is this:



The desert, a caravanne, shadows of men and beasts, endless dunes, a strange Arab named Ayoub Al-Samir.

Rules: Must be original and no longer than 2000 words.

If the forum, through its votes, chooses and actual winner for an actual story---and not just some spew about nipple clamps or whatever, I will forward SAS $50 USD.

Let the picture provoke your imagination.

Devon



**PS: I will NOT enter this contest. It is to bring out creativity in others.
"Please to let Sanji to tell you now story of small dark Bengali boy and huge white swimming tiger in clear pool deep in jungle wet" Sanji, August, 2008

"I used to get in a fight nearly every day at school, and I usually won. If ever I came home without a mark on my body somewhere, my mother would think I skipped school that day." Dévon, September, 2008

"Je me battais presque tous les jours à l'école, et je gagnais assez souvent. Si jamais j'étais rentré chez moi sans une tache quelquepart sur mon corps, ma mère aurait cru que j'avais grillé la classe ce jour-là. Dévon, septembre, 2008
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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:39 PM

Can we use your Joey LeGay JPK shtick? whistling.gif

#3 Ankhy

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:40 PM

When is the deadline for entry?
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#4 Devon

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:45 PM

QUOTE (Ankhy @ Jan 3 2009, 10:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
When is the deadline for entry?


Let's make the deadline the inauguration date: January 20th. And judging after that.

Devon
"Please to let Sanji to tell you now story of small dark Bengali boy and huge white swimming tiger in clear pool deep in jungle wet" Sanji, August, 2008

"I used to get in a fight nearly every day at school, and I usually won. If ever I came home without a mark on my body somewhere, my mother would think I skipped school that day." Dévon, September, 2008

"Je me battais presque tous les jours à l'école, et je gagnais assez souvent. Si jamais j'étais rentré chez moi sans une tache quelquepart sur mon corps, ma mère aurait cru que j'avais grillé la classe ce jour-là. Dévon, septembre, 2008
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"The only way to escape the crowds of niggers everywhere was to duck into a bookstore."
Joey Leguay, 2002, or thereabouts

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:48 PM

The dusty caravan came out from behind the swirling dunes and there was the modern 10 lane freeway where the caravan was promptly hit by a bus.


The End

#6 Ankhy

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:52 PM

QUOTE (Devon @ Jan 3 2009, 10:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Ankhy @ Jan 3 2009, 10:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
When is the deadline for entry?


Let's make the deadline the inauguration date: January 20th. And judging after that.

Devon


ok
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#7 Devon

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:55 PM

QUOTE (Ankhy @ Jan 3 2009, 10:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Devon @ Jan 3 2009, 10:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Ankhy @ Jan 3 2009, 10:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
When is the deadline for entry?


Let's make the deadline the inauguration date: January 20th. And judging after that.

Devon


ok


Sounds like a good date to me.

Let's pin this if you can. I am 100% serious about promoting creativity here.

Devon
"Please to let Sanji to tell you now story of small dark Bengali boy and huge white swimming tiger in clear pool deep in jungle wet" Sanji, August, 2008

"I used to get in a fight nearly every day at school, and I usually won. If ever I came home without a mark on my body somewhere, my mother would think I skipped school that day." Dévon, September, 2008

"Je me battais presque tous les jours à l'école, et je gagnais assez souvent. Si jamais j'étais rentré chez moi sans une tache quelquepart sur mon corps, ma mère aurait cru que j'avais grillé la classe ce jour-là. Dévon, septembre, 2008
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"The only way to escape the crowds of niggers everywhere was to duck into a bookstore."
Joey Leguay, 2002, or thereabouts

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 10:57 PM

QUOTE (Devon @ Jan 3 2009, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I am 100% serious about promoting creativity here.

Devon

says the one that keeps rehashing old shit from years ago because he can't even write an ad for lawn mulchers 24.gif

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:00 PM

QUOTE (writers block @ Jan 3 2009, 10:57 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Devon @ Jan 3 2009, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I am 100% serious about promoting creativity here.

Devon

says the one that keeps rehashing old shit from years ago because he can't even write an ad for lawn mulchers 24.gif

Another thread I'll never have to read.

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:21 PM

بعد أن جلس على كثيب لمدة ثلاثة أيام ، قافلة من الجمال أخيرا تأتي الماضي. لم يكن هناك نقاش على النحو الذي من شأنه أن عائلتي وجبة القادم ؛ أود أن يقتل ما يصل الى أستطع ويعود لهم ما لا يمكن أن تأكل نفسي هذه الليلة.
They are actors playing parts that are real only for us; they are the masks behind which we see our own faces. - Wendy Doniger O'Flaherty

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:22 PM

It's almost like Cher's Farewell tour..........
When I'm GOOD I'm VERY VERY GOOD but when I'm NOT even the DEVIL turns & runs for cover.......

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:23 PM

QUOTE (OAW @ Jan 3 2009, 11:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's almost like Cher's Farewell tour..........


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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:25 PM

Aww cool. I'm not all that creative but I look forward to reading more stories.

ura1.gif I've always wanted to ride a camel ura1.gif
It's almost like you can hear what I'm thinking.

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:32 PM

QUOTE (sugar @ Jan 3 2009, 11:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
ura1.gif I've always wanted to ride a camel ura1.gif


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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:34 PM

I wish they would pin this message, Sugar. I'm serious about a contest. I would like to read some other peoples stories.

I did ride a camel once. No big deal. If they don't like you, they spit on you and it burns.

All the best,

Dev
"Please to let Sanji to tell you now story of small dark Bengali boy and huge white swimming tiger in clear pool deep in jungle wet" Sanji, August, 2008

"I used to get in a fight nearly every day at school, and I usually won. If ever I came home without a mark on my body somewhere, my mother would think I skipped school that day." Dévon, September, 2008

"Je me battais presque tous les jours à l'école, et je gagnais assez souvent. Si jamais j'étais rentré chez moi sans une tache quelquepart sur mon corps, ma mère aurait cru que j'avais grillé la classe ce jour-là. Dévon, septembre, 2008
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"The only way to escape the crowds of niggers everywhere was to duck into a bookstore."
Joey Leguay, 2002, or thereabouts