Don't give up your day job.

Geeze...cut him/her a break... It's the cover of what may be a very creative project!

Keep an open mind, as NEXUS implies...

Is Squeeze or Devon in this story?

Ok, so there's the first 6 pages.

I started this last April, so there's a bunch more where that came from.

Keep in mind that I have gotten a little better over the last few months, so it does improve from here.

It's rough, but I really like it. I look forward to more!

Zombies were mentioned! Ok, I'm hooked!

BTW, Photobucket is better for image hosting on boards like this.

Borrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
rrrring.

Wake me when its over.

I like it. More please, Undead!

As if you read it.........you only like it because it has a guys ass in it.

And that's wrong why?

I think it's cool when people share their creations.

For those who are criticizing, what have you created? Care to share?

I'm looking forward to more, Undead, thanks.

Post away, Mr. Undead.

LOL


That aside I'm looking forward to the better parts

Well, I do have a fondness for yaoi, so you might be right about that last part.

Hey undead, it would be a little better if you did 2 things:

1) Put a chapter all in one place so we could browse the whole set, and then see the past ones eventually.
2) Use better lighting, or camera settings so it shows up better. You might see if the macro setting on your camera will give better results.

Other than that, it looks good

I like the intro, it's very twilight-zonish. You could probably turn that guy into your narrator for various projects. Excellent job so far!

If'n you are the REAL "Undead" from days gone past, a hearty HELLOOOOO!!!

hey undead, so far so good!

great beginning!

I bet you want to get written in to the story line to suck the naked guys cock?

/HTH

yup, it's me.

Real life has been busy for me, b ut it's all going well.

I have been saving this thread for the piece de resistance!

Time to dive in!

Bet if you scanned the pages and spiffed them up a bit in Photoshop, it'd be spectacular.

Looking forward to your next installment(s)!

Enjoying this so far...

Good to see you again!

Happy New Year!



Now to go back and let the first three pages load.

Damn dial-up.

Good so far, that giant crack thing in time/space reminded me of Titor's vagina.

...and here I thought Titor had a Johnson...

LOL

Long time Undead, nice to see you.

LOL!

What sort of retardation?

He looks like the singer for Rammstein. His armband should emit pyrotechnics. That would potentially put his nakedness in peril, but being a member of Rammstein, it should not bother him.

What's that thing on his back?

If you don't know what that thing is on his back, you weren't paying attention. And this from a fellow artist!?